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  • Echoes of War

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    (Verse 1)
    In the jungle's heart, where shadows dance,
    I walked alone, with no second chance,
    With every step, through the thick and the mire,
    I sought my peace, amidst the fire.

    (Chorus)
    Oh, the echoes of war, they linger in my ear,
    A solemn tune, for all that I've seen here,
    With every chord, I'm searching for light,
    In the heart of darkness, through my endless night.

    (Verse 2)
    The nights were long, under the canopy's veil,
    My dreams of home seemed so frail,
    With my guitar's cry, cutting through the pain,
    I sang for meaning, in the pouring rain.

    (Chorus)
    Oh, the echoes of war, they linger in my ear,
    A solemn tune, for all that I've seen here,
    With every chord, I'm searching for light,
    In the heart of darkness, through my endless night.

    (Bridge)
    My guitar weeps, like the tears I couldn't shed,
    For every brother, every soul that bled,
    In the silence, after my guns were still,
    I found my peace, in the will to heal.

    (Solo)
    [Poignant electric guitar solo]

    (Verse 3)
    Back to the world, where they couldn't understand,
    The scars I carried, the invisible band,
    But in my heart, the music plays,
    A testament to those long, lost days.

    (Chorus)
    Oh, the echoes of war, they linger in my ear,
    A solemn tune, for all that I've seen here,
    With every chord, I'm searching for light,
    In the heart of darkness, through my endless night.

    (Outro)
    Now my war is done, but the song remains,
    For every soldier, in the memory's chains,
    In the solemn rock, my story unfolds,
    A quest for peace, in the stories untold.


    Recording Studio: Legacy Recording Experience ($50,000) Marketing Budget: Large ($1,000,000)

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    Brink

    · Edited by Brink

      

    So I actually like the chorus, where I think Suno lets down is in the transition from the verses to the chorus musically speaking. I absolutely love the general tune though especially starting off, it reminds me of the classic rock of my childhood. I also think Suno drops off a little too before the outro.

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    TedderBear

      

    I'm torn here. These lyrics are poignant and giving me Hans Zelmerlow vibes. But I think Suno let you down a bit here with the chorus. The guitar solo is nice, but it doesn't quite make up for the mediocre chorus for me.

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